Kirei ni Shitemoraemasuka - Vol. 1 Ch. 3 - The Continual Flow From The Hot Springs Is Our Pride After All. [Limited Series End]

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p 22 felt so out of place. Why is she telling him she ha no parents and no memories? Felt really awkward. Everything up to that point had been real solid for me. And everything else about the chapter was great of course.
 
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Nothing like causally mentioning you have amnesia and you've been apart from your family for TWO YEARS.
 

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