Shikametsura ni Kiss

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Cute but terrible writing as a shoujo. The pacing is too fast and dumb for her to suddenly
start crying after hitting her toe in the dark realizing she's lonely. I know she's a teenager but this angst is ridiculous. Then suddenly he appears since he felt she sounded lonely to comfort her and realize their feelings are mutual... So dumb. 2/10.
 

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