Terror Man - Vol. 1 Ch. 66

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thanks for the chapters! though, there is some proofreading needed... cause sometimes you have the right words but in the wrong places..
 
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Shit's getting real now.
66 chapters of introduction, the real deal begins.
Thanks for the batch release !
 
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I guess you were impatient to make the 7 chapters batch release. There are some mistakes, especially in chapter 66: "A officer" - it repeated few times...; past/present time, seemingly missed words, crossbar I rule... Nevertheless, tnx for chapters, be safe and continue to joy with your work.
 
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that's dumb. strip morality and law then desensitize with cruel acts? nothing pure about that. if you want to experiment their purity then desensitize them with both moral AND immoral acts but don't teach them any doctrine or philosophy and let them decide which they like better.
 

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