Wild Lilies and Violets

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There are no transition scenes from one chapter to another and it's a bit disorienting to figure out what's going on.
 
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Warning for people looking for good Yuri , this shit starts interesting but then there is suddenly a dude masturbating and it has the generic rape attempt scene.
 
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The story is choppy; it looks so much like a poorly written fanfic and too confusing as there are too many things going on without any proper narration.
 
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I guess you shouldn't judge a book by its cover.


It was great but each chapter are too short
 

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