2DK, G-pen, Alarm clock. - Vol. 1 Ch. 4

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"You keep adding new characters.
Do you revise the dialogue when necessary?
You stuff too much into it so in the end, you can't tell what the focus is."
Seems like this is a manga about Subaro Uta :D

But seriously, don't fight over a guy.
 
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Funny how Koyuki called Kaede a slut even though she's 'slutting' her way up the food chain. I don't know what kind of person I hate the most, girls that do this or guys that fall for it.
 
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honestly the new character is annoying as fuck and its funny she called someone else a slut when she was literally trying to get with a guy just to try to get ahead LOL

anyway with that said i can already see the drama coming with her and her getting in the way of the main pair so least she'll make things interesting
 
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I hate this manga trope when some douchebag\bitch just breaks into the house, screaming, throws stupidest accusations, threatens etc and everyone just goes along with it. Yeah usually it turns out this person is not that bad, but it doesn't make it less annoying. Just throw this piece of shit out, why do you even listen to her?
 

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