The City of Imprisoned Love - Vol. 2 Ch. 12 - "Suspicion"

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I feel like this entire situation could have been executed a lot better than it was; writing fell short on this one
 
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I know that people do stupid things for love, but dammit.
 
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MC's a dumbass and this chapter and the last should've been released in the opposite order.
 
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Why does he wish to die so much?
They tied up and hide the titties and suddenly nobody is interested, not that anything interesting is happening, but still it seems it was the only draw and the mystery is just a convoluted mess.

So are they both managers? probably only Ruka, but who is Yukiko anyway.
 
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I understand dumb protagonists just be like they do, and that people in weird crazy stressful situations don't always act in the smartest way possible, but c'mon, are you kidding me?

dude: "We have reason to think one of these people is a thing, find out which one or I'll just kill them both."
guy: "Wait, no, you're wrong! Hey person, you're not thing are you?"
person: "No I'm not thing, but other person might be thing."
guy: "Hey other person, you aren't thing are you?"
other person:"No I'm not thing, but person might be thing."
guy: "See, obviously neither of them is thing! You messed up!"
dude: "Yeah one of them is lying dipshit."
guy "NO WAY!!!"
 
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If the next chapter is of the same shit quality like this and the previous one...
 
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Hahahaha...a nd dropped
one stupid plothole in here is how the manager guy found out that one of them is a manager, all of this doesnt need to happen, and you know yukiko will survive because of plot armor and author need her for more boobs fanservice
 
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can't tell if he's just not thinking straight because of the situation he's in, or if he's ACTUALLY the world's biggest fucking dumbass.
you get one more chapter author.
 
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wutdefuq? MC, are u fkin serious? i'm facepalming so hard right now
 
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How can he be so stupid? This guy legitimately has some type of disability.
 
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How can someone be so stupid?
Hes more stupid then a cheerleader in a horror movie
 
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Controversial Opinion:
MC being stupid is in-character here and can be explained by him not being fully "there" mentally. Also we have more information than he does so it's not like he can make an inference beyond a shadow of a doubt. Still, him offering to off himself is a bit extreme because we know he still wants to save his waifu, so that's weird.
 

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