Jitsu wa Ore, Saikyou Deshita?

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Vol. 1 Ch. 6 - The Birth of a Hero of Justice
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What the fuck woman, idiot, why would you LEAVE the safe hiding place and try to kill yourself? Fucking idiot
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It is my first time seeing such an obvious self-insert MC.

It's so edgy when the MC is shouting "SHUT UP!" every 5 pages. Yikes. The story is heavily lacking in worldbuilding, philosophy, character development, and plot (it keeps jumping all over the place, 'bad guys came, bad guys died, bad guys came again, bad guys died again'. There is no development to intrigue the readers).

This manga made me realize that anyone can write something that can be drawn into a manga. All the author had to do was sit and think how the story would develop, pace the world the character was in, and put some messages in-between the lines of the story. Instead, we have this 'bad guys came outta nowhere, and hurt my family, so I killed them, and they did it again, so I killed them again, etc.' This is the type of story you get when you have no clue what you are writing about, and sit down in front of a piece of paper every day thinking about 'where was I left off? Yes, bad guys attacked from X Kingdom... Let's have the MC do this now.' That is why the readers shouldn't expect any story besides the author's whims. That is the entire story, the MC moves based not on a plot that is going to develop into a story, but some guy sitting in front of the computer thinking 'what would I do next? Kick some bad guys' butts!' This is garbage.
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@Kaarme
It's ok to click on the spoiler, it's just an image related to the chapter. I put spoiler on it to stop the image from appearing in the comment and eating up the space in the comment sections.

First of all the one that receiving the instruction is Charlotte lol. She just pointing her mother to where she should go lol. Her mother didn't stop following the instruction but rather that's the end of the instruction. Haruto plan was to guide them by using Charlotte to go inside the cave. Her mother didn't know that Haruto put up an illusion barrier blocking the view from the outside cave so that's why she had to go outside to lure the enemies away from the cave. Haruto give this half ass plan because he was waken up by suprise from the sleep and found out about this surprise event(ch5). He doesn't have much time to construct a good instruction and so he gave Charlotte path guide to the cave to buy time for him to arrive. He didn't expect her mother to go out and do some self sacrifice.
I mean, did you really read the chapter or not? is it really that hard to speculate the story? It's not rocket science lol.

What you should be asking here is why the fuck Haruto didn't use his barrier skill to immobilize the pursue in the first place. He did able to use barrier skill and attach it on to Charlotte's ear giving her instruction and cover the cave entrance with illusion barrier. It should be possible to stop the pursue with the barrier to begin with and it should be the best possible way he should go for.
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@mismarca I'm not going to click any spoilers, but what you said outside of them doesn't really counter anything I said, that it's pointing to first follow orders in a critical situation where you haven't got any other choice, but then suddenly stop following them for no particular reason. With the way she chose to do it, she might have simply run into the forest without any external instructions in the first place, then dump the child somewhere, and try to distract the villains. Now she decided to follow the instructions at first but then suddenly abandon them, as if they had never existed, as if whoever gave them had no plan either, despite obviously guiding them somewhere. This is no different from getting a three weeks antibiotics prescription, but then only eating them for a single week because you personally see no point in going through the whole period and suspect the doctor didn't know what he was doing.
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@Kaarme
@TomTangent
The illusion magic activated once they enter the cave.
She tried to lure them off away from the cave but ended up finding that there is an illusion magic covering the entrance.

She just used an excuse "to find the one that help us" to make Charlotte feels safe, trying to avoid her from telling the truth that she was about to do some self sacrifice.
You can see her determination face in this page.
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@TomTangent She ran, and jumped, quite a distance to the cave, following the instructions. You'd think the one giving the instructions wouldn't have purposefully led them to a meaningless place. However, if you only follow the instructions partially, you might as well not follow them at all. She simply couldn't trust the one giving the instructions and instead thought it would be better for her to die.
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@Kaarme she didn't realize it was a illusion magic. It was bright ass cave with a giant opening, she was probably trying to distract the soldiers or find the one giving instructions.
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Why did she run out of the cave in the first place? Ah, to kill herself, of course. Makes perfect sense in this story where nothing makes sense.
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FUS RO DAH!!!
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um, i'm confused. didn't make it in time? hua??? hopefully this is explained???
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yes, yes..yes..! kill the trash!
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Mama lives. Milk supply secured.
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@subarukyun ah I see, a scholar of immense wisdom, lloll
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The inside of that cave looks like the inside of pussies in hentai lol


Also, oyakodon when?
Last edited 1 year ago by subarukyun.
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why is he saying he didn't make it in time? It looks like he made it in time to me.
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@Nk9bjP4A probably so she couldn't be used as a hostage against her husband.

@Uluri she didn't know the entrance was hidden before she left.
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uhh... why did she want to stab herself? I don't get it.
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Destroy them all! Also what a dumb mom. Yay finally in a safe place where we can hide > Goes outside of safe place while currently being chased. :O
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@Argolok @ColonelCrisp Charlotte says Hahaue-sama for Dear Mother, and Okaa-sama for Mother
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@ColonelCrisp In japanese it would be Oka- sama, personally I too dislike it being translated like this
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