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Ch. 61
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Glad I wasn't the only one confused by the sudden motorcycle.
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@Glomoro ok... thanks for the info...
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@zetsuravez I believe this had a link to NovelUpdates on its page here. There should either be chapters directly there if anyone's been translating it, or they have links to where the person doing so hosts it. I don't really remember how it works since I don't read 'em myself, but that would be a safe place to start at least. The MangaUpdates link might let you find out about the group/person working on the novel version too, since I think they have pages for novels most of the time as well.
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@Glomoro hmmm... it is probably best if i read the original media(light novel) to know the much full details of the story than the manga that just have the main point of the story with an ending phase like"the rest is history" or such...

anyway, where do you guys read the novel?...
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@zetsuravez It wasn't a full motorcycle the first time it appeared, and that guy was the only one who adapted to it that quickly and could actually use it better than its design even really allowed for because of his wind arts as I recall. The version we just saw this time looks like an improvement on the basic model shown in testing before. As for the pacing and skipping over the direct "So I started and continued to develop this thing" involved in that, well, adaptation from a novel. They're all kind of like that from time to time. I'd say the novel version is like, excessively detailed sometimes, the anime is probably a bare bones husk based on that with almost all explanations omitted, and the manga is somewhere in the middle. Not saying it's an excuse or anything, just that you sort of get used to it after seeing so many of them go exactly like that. Personally, I'm fine with the motorcycle as things stand, because it didn't just crop up out nowhere. It wasn't explained in depth, but it had a development process shown in the background along the way and you're easily able to assume that if he's making frameworks for four wheeled motor vehicles, he could have also tried a two wheel one in that process.

Perhaps if this version of things isn't working for you in ways like that though, you can give the novel a shot to see if things are any better. Either the pacing and explanations are better there because things like what you're looking for with the motorcycle's development were in greater detail, or this is a very faithful adaptation and you should mark this stuff down in the "cons" column for the series. Personally I kind of can't stand the Japanese web and light novel format, so I just check out any manga or anime adaptations they get and either enjoy those enough to stick with them however far they end up going (number one "con" for so many of them is "Here ya go, we adapted like 2 or three volumes of the novel but tough titties, we're done. Go buy the novels for the rest.) or move on from them entirely. The way those things are written just doesn't do it for me.
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@Glomoro look, just because the manga shows that he is making the car and other prototypes does not mean it is ok of an explanation about having a working motorcycle... i will be accepting the story if its a working car because that was it was shown in earlier chapter... but a motorcycle?... and not to mention about how the dude in a motorcycle knows how to ride it...

also, as to why im saying this now... up until now the main problem of this story(in my opinion) is that they keep having this pace very fast that it was almost they skip some of the story... but things change when the motorcycle came in like it was normal as if they are using this thing for a couple of chapters...
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@zetsuravez Admittedly it wasn't specifically addressed on its own like "I'm going to make this specific thing," but we saw it when it was tested for the first time alongside the general development of vehicles he's been doing (including the stuff the princess drove around in) and several times since then. I dunno why you're saying this now of all times unless you forgot about it between releases or you finally just got sick of seeing the thing now?
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Flirting in the middle of battle. Jeez, talk about leeway
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i guess this chapter (or even the whole manga) is poorly made... having a motorcycle without an explanation on when and how he made it or how did the war escalates or who the hell this person and that person... i guess having one chapter per month with 18~22 pages per chapter makes this story rushed or having a missing piece of the story...
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@boag @BloodySorcerer

Ah, maybe I missed that. I understood that his control panel can change properties of materials like increasing durability and changing colours but the more specific details totally flew over me.

Whatever, I guess. At this point I just want to see him fuck someone
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@saredesu materials has been a problem since forever, the manga just haven't been that good at showing it. He never used just dirt to make his buildings. But yeah it's true that the manga artist is not using his pannels correctly.
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Their noses keep bothering me.
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@saredesu
cause the plot demands that he cant build an underground bunker made out of dirt.
@zetsuravez
between timeskips that are happening every 5 panels or so since i think chapter 34 or something,when he first started making the racing cart for the princess.

and course fucking fuel is not an issue for maching with a perpetual motion engine.
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Why is material is an issue now? Didn't he can just make anything as long he has dirt?
Also with the names they are throwing around, I can't even see the flow of the battle. All I know is they going to win.
People saying that complaining about too much text in manga is sign of being weak, but in this manga it's just poorly managed. Death Note for example, has as much text if not more, but they managed it with pictures and props. Here they are just throwing words around. Show, don't just tell, is one one the key in comic storytelling and this manga has failed this part. West? Which way is west? Battalion coming, yeah it's 900 people strong, but in term of scale, how big it is? Are they enough to overrun the forest? Oh they gonna walk through that pass, let's build a fort here. Idk, it's mite too small for a battalion imo.

I'm still sticking around just to see who Yusuke end up with and what he do with the other girls but this arc is overstaying its welcome.
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@Ironclad It makes me think that the time which has passed is greater than we see because of how much land they cover unless these countries are very small. The city only had 5 battalions so that does seem a bit small considering it is supposed to be the capital
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ITT, idiot(s) patronizingly mistaking criticism of a poorly written, mediocre manga for complaining about "having to read a comic book". Looks like a boomer, at least in behavior, snuck through.
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Christ, look at all these children complaining about having to READ a comic book.

How about we get a pop-up picture book for you pansies?
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@Hoezell @kuzunagi13 @Sep10trion For example in chapter 56 you can see a very early version of it, like a proof of concept. He merely made it complete between chapters.
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So...Booring....Falling....asleep...zzzzzzzz
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This chapter feels rushed. They took their time in previous chapters to discuss and present the situation, but suddenly armies are moving, fights are being decided off-screen and the fight of the country might be decided right away (not in this ambush, mind you, but in the fight for the capital that is happening in the background).
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