Temple

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Vol. 1 Ch. 3 - Fate
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Tbh the plot is generic
But there is an Ara ara girl, and the superb art, so it works out.
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So now he is stuck paying the debt then I suppose. K.


Kurage is really cute, please be in the next chapter.
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hope you'll continue it, i just love this author
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This is basically a Love Hina rip-off, only the writer has no talent for writing whatsoever.
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I really hope this doesn't turn into a shitty story about how he needs to pay off his father's debt, as though that's somehow required. It's not. The Japanese system abolished the inheritance of debt a while ago, and his father is still freaking alive!

The story doesn't even need to use that as an excuse to keep him at the temple. There are a number of alternatives. If it does go the dumb shit debt route, I will be severely disappointed.
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This plot wtf? lol :3
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@ujjwal9
Does she carry the debt slip with her everywhere?

What if she drew that up in the last moment to secure a man-slave?
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Why the fuck is a fucking nunnery lending people money? How do they even have that much money anyway? I thought they depend on donations/state funding.

Wouldn't it make more sense for his father to have gotten that debt for causing damages to the temple or something like that?
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Ah shit. How would you like me to pay out the debt?

Man servant?
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What business does a temple have lending money anyways? is the author retarded for coming up with this? yes, very likely
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Ah yeah, another crap parent, so surprising.
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I thought it was good till I saw the last page.

Does she carry the debt slip with her everywhere?
Last edited 7 mo ago by ujjwal9.
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This is not how I foresaw him being bound to the temple.
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wow, what a scum of a father. I would've track him down right after that.

on another note, the MC looks like the guy that got cockblocked in Grand Blue
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Why did you lend him $200,000 USD?
How do you have $200,000 USD?
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Did not see that coming
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God dammit I though I was going to be a good story