Journey To The West

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Ch. 46 - She Who Defied Fate
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Way too many subplots going on at once.

Why can't some professional writers understand that you really shouldn't have more than two going together.
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the mute neighbor literally says mute lmao im dead
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poor tie wa. also she's been wearing the same dress for 16 years and god knows how that thing stays on.
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3-4 PoV and some of them even have different a timeline. Fitting all that in a chapter creates a mess.
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I think he's doing the snippets this way since he assumes the readers have read the original Journey to the West. But for people who haven't it can be quite confusing.

I feel pretty bad for that girl. That is a crappy way to live.
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I couldn't understand it any longer.
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I on the other hand couldn't be more happy to see him tackling various stories at once, but i would like if he stuck to telling Wukong's tale past and futere in a more orderly manner, as of now we are covering his beginnings, his journey to the west, and his present as a soul all at the same time.
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I wish the author would focus on only one thing, instead of talking about many and never finishing then