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Vol. 3 Ch. 12.1 - Lyotal Family (2)
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Page 8 "is she worry about me, ..." Shouldn't it be "is she worried about me" or "does she worry about me" or is it just me?

Last edited 7 mo ago by LowSanity.

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@zenyo Yea, but my point is that it's not well-thought out as a story element. With this introduced as part of her ability, now anything that requires some sort of item to be solved can be solved by her ability by "making a potion in a bottle that has a detachable version of that item".

Last edited 7 mo ago by GodGinrai.

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Calvin! Calvin! This needs a BL tag. No wonder the elder brother hasn't married yet.
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Just make a potion to rule over the whole world duh, why bother with ppl
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Had Calvin been mentioned before or was this just an ass-pull by the author?
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@GodGinrai :
It's just that she is smartly using her goddess given power which is to be able to create potions with any effect she want in any container she can imagine (she discovered that fact after she got the power, finding that the goddess was quite sloppy when she created it, as the power just litteraly work as she asked for, she never had a second though about how broken it would be).

Last edited 7 mo ago by zenyo.

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@Psychronia Shes too random and doesnt have a distinct character trait. Thats pretty much it and also the reason why youre confused.
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Something about our MC still really bothers me and I can't figure out why. It's similar to the 40,000 Gold Coins one, yet distinctly different. It's absolutely not the overpowered thing since I don't feel it in stories that are much worse about it.

She's...arrogant? But it's not like she's ever wrong so it's just confidence.
She's contradictory between wanting to lay low and making big power moves? But the move right here is clearly a good way to secure her freedom.
Manipulative? Not really any more than anyone else around her, and certainly less malicious.
Wise? No, that's absolutely a good thing and an MC that thinks is very welcome!

BAH. No descriptor I can come up with feels even close to the heart of the issue and it's driving me nuts.
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I'm kind of disappointed with the very end of the chapter. Did she really need to have the broken ability to have her potion appear in any design bottle, including ones that just happen to have detachable useful and/or expensive items like jewelry?

Last edited 7 mo ago by GodGinrai.

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Thanks for the update!!!
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Thanks for the quick update @sonic.

Last edited 7 mo ago by Nick86.

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FUNA fills their stories with false starts, this is Kaoru's 3rd 'start' and the one which will carry the story for some time.
The first start was when she realised that potions weren't really a thing in this world and she was accidentally displaying miracles, and that as a nobody she would be controlled if she didn't leave.
The second is the one where she realised that even laying low as a waitress, her nature leads to drawing too much attention, and thus she has to leave again, or as a peasant face being controlled by someone else.
This time,
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I think she just likes trolling people.

But in a benevolent way.
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Are you doing it right?


Thanks for the chapter.
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oh.....that's one way to skyrim-mod a potion bottle
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so she is changing homes again?
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Ahhh, so quick! Thanks for the double release~!

Oh my, she just loves attention....but only the first 2 seconds of said attention, then she needs to run away.
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I don't know, I think she's doing a decent job of nailing that fine line between the vulgar and the divine. She's having fun with her little "miracles" but ultimately either skipping out before she can be rewarded or deferring the reward to a future favor to help someone else out.

I doubt the goddess is anything but pleased with what Kaoru is doing, since her only discernible goal at the moment seems to be subtly encouraging kindness and compassion. May shake out to be something more complex in the future but as it stands so far she's doing a bang up job of being a mysterious "divine" philanthropist.
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She is starting making some really big moves now isn't she.
No longer feels like the little girl who sliced her face open, made the queen cry, and then ran away in the middle of a royal ball. Totally different....
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..... On second thought, it looks like she has mellowed out.
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I don't understand Kaoru's intentions at all, sometimes it seems like she wants to lay low, but then other times she does something which is obviously going to attract massive amounts of attention.
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