are.. the tears... overflowing.. *sob

all that pain and the ending was just meh

tragedy tag where u at

omg a japanese person who believes in therapy

What was that bait

Nice

fuck bro. This hits so fucking hard man I’m so happy for kanami :)

Rather than an incident to reconile them, it'd be better if it was gradual. I know kanami is the one trying to reach out, but eventually the older bro should reciprocate even a little of those feelings. I'd feel more natural, rather than having a third-party (or incident) be the thing that fixes everything at once. I would have cheered if the older brother himself was able to meet someone like kanami did, and then like the whole story would be them awkwardly trying to reconile, with lots of fluff, and THEN use the brother's past as the conflict that needs to be resolved, with the help of kanami.

Geez im rewriting the whole story....

There's something wrong with this but I can't pin point it hmmm

Im happy for the development but I think I would have enjoyed it better if they didn't make the brother so stubborn. I enjoyed the explanation for the brothers behavior, but I think I would have enjoyed it more if he wasn't so persistent at rejecting her attempts towards reconcile. Or maybe if there was more growth between their relationship rather than on incident causing all the development, it may have been better for the incident to be the final push. What I mean is maybe within each rejection he grew more towards his sister. This might have been the case and I missed it, but it would have been nice it was more obvious? Those are my thoughts anyways and I'm going based off of memory and my memory is horrible and I wouldn't be able to write anything nowhere near as good as this anyways. Overall it's been a pleasure reading this I'm looking forward to the conclusion.

The resolution is.. a bit unsatisfying in my opinion. I mean all those story, incidents, and past events that has been builded up really all crumbling down with a bad resolution. I feel like nothing got resolved, that's probably why it didn't feel good lmao. Anyway the middle part is pretty good, the drama's okay but the resolution really didn't do the story justice.
I'd give this a 7.5 on story and a solid 10 for the translators.

@Roman99 well, good thing all humans are the same person.

Still, I'm kinda confuse with Kanami's brother character dev. If I abused by my parents, then they die, I'll really glad and happy than before. Sure, aside from being bullied in school, at least I lost one burden.

Though I'll kinda hate Kanami because she treated different, but still consider her love, she just kid tho.

These points makes me cannot feel his position and lost my empathy even he being bullied. Still, u can move after ur parents dead. Kanami still love u, don't hurt her.

And I surely can't let him live with Kanami. At least, not just two of them. If Kanami only with her bro, my worries can't disappear welp

damn this so precious

@Liu
Wow you probably think the girl is worse then the bullies for not helping him with his life problems.
Also only the girl witnessed his bullying.

Again, they have absolutely no obligation to help him with all his problems, plus the girl did help him once but he took it like an ass.

Are you going to spend all your time and dedication to help a complete stranger with his life problems?

You're insane if you think MC's friends are bad people.
They care, and the girl even regrets not doing more even though theres absolutely no need for her to do so.

What happened to the brother IS NOT their responsibility. And its certainly not their fault.

Man this ending could've been done 10x better, but it's alright.

One more chapter left I guess :0

Nice. That was a pretty good read.

This chapter left a sour taste in my mouth, though I don't approve how the brother acted, I dislike how they paint the rental bro to be some kind of saint that knows what needs to be done despite not having ever solved his own personal issues, unless that gets resolved later. I don't mind kanami seeing him rental bro as friend but should take his advice with caution seeing as it didn't help her half the time and proved to only worsen the situation. It just seems like him and his friends are a little self entitled In thinking they're any better than the brother despite not knowing the whole story.

To be honest I think what the brother offered was much better. But at least the rental one is keeping an eye on them.